Friday, 15 October 2010

Second Draft of the Script

This is for my introduction. I have decided to change some things around so that the narrative questions the audience more and makes them feel like they're interacting more.

Have you ever used Facebook, Bebo, Twitter or MySpace? Are you one of the 81% of people who use social networking to bully because it is funny? Or are you one of the 42% whose children have been bullied? Cyberbullying is a strong issue for me and for many other kids. The use of social networking as a screen to hide behind for bullies has become more popular over previous years, and this shouldn’t be the case.

Facebook is now home to 500 million active users, and 28,000,000 of those make up the United Kingdom’s Facebook users. With so many people, worldwide, Facebook is the perfect place to find friends, relationships and give people their own identity. But some people take this too far, by creating fake identities.

Saturday, 9 October 2010

Music Decisions

Here are my possible song choices for my documentary. I have also chosen my favourite lyrics and the lyrics which relate to the subject.

•Things I’ll Never Say – Avril Lavigne
“Guess I'm wishing my life away with these things I'll never say”

•High School Never Ends – Bowling For Soup
“4 Years you think for sure, that's all you've got to endure, all the total dicks, all the stuck-up Chicks, so superficial, so immature”

•Life After You – Daughtry
“I'm out here alone just tryin' to get home, to tell you I was wrong but you already know”

•It’s Not Too Late – Demi Lovato
“Here I am, feels like the walls are closing in, once again it's time to face it and be strong”

•Once When I was Little –James Morrison
“Yeah I was free more then, I could pretend more then, that this life could only show me good times, once, when I was little”

Cooler Than Me – Mike Posner
“You think you’re cooler than me”

•Firework – Katy Perry
“Baby you’re a firework, come on show them what you’re worth”

Below is a music player with the above songs on.



I have e-mailed all of the artists for copyright permission, however, if I'm only going to use small sections of the song, I should be permitted to do so by OCR.

These songs have been chosen as I believe they can all be related to the storyline. I think using up to date and current songs makes the program more interesting. When watching some documentaries, I listened out for the music and try to see what the song was called, or look at the lyrics. Most of the time, the song was relevant in one way or another. Out of my choices, I think that Cooler Than Me and Firework are the best choices. I think so because they conflict each other. One talks about reputation and having to be much ‘cooler’ than everyone else, whereas Firework is more about becoming someone and not being pulled down by others – being a firework and showing your colours.

First Draft of the Script

First Draft Script for media:

News report

“Many of us in High School had a run in with the bully, but at least we knew who they were. There’s now a new form of bully, the CYBERBULLY, and often they are anonymous.”

(Whilst Candy instrumental is playing)

In cartoons, bullies are represented as those tough characters who take your lunch money and call you names to you face, but the new generation means that people are able to bully you through a screen. This is called cyberbullying. This new generation means that children aren’t just worried about day to day bullies at school, they even get the abuse at home. I’m Hailey Marks-Burton. An A-Level student who believes this behaviour is uncalled for and that the world of social networking should be policed more. In the second episode of the bullying series, we are going to discover the world where people aren’t who they say they are and meet some of those people who have personally been victimised and the families of those who have taken their own lives.

(Whilst Pokerface instrumental is playing)

In 2004, Mark Zuckerburg, a University student with no social skills found himself working on a project which would soon become the world’s largest social networking site. Facebook, the website which we ourselves visit on average 4 times a day, is the largest social networking site in the world. Creating a profile for users allows each person to have their own identity. However, some people take advantage of this.

(Whilst Hometown Glory instrumental is playing)

Jennifer, from Blackburn, was just 16 when she took her own life. On the 23rd of April 2009, Jennifer became friends with a suspicious account, this account belonged to Adam Long. A 19 year old who had just left college. He didn’t have many friends but the list consisted mainly of girls. As Jennifer and Adam became friendlier after swapping MSN addresses, Jennifer soon became a girl who would spend most of her time in her bedroom.

Mother: We didn’t hear much from her. And when we did, she’d still have a phone in her hand texting away. I feel… feel bad that we didn’t restrict the amount of access she had. The last year we had her, we hardly saw her. (Crying for a while and cut-aways of room)

Jennifer spending all her time in her bedroom was unknowingly falling in love with Adam; The nineteen year old from Preston being just a small distance away, she felt like she wasn’t on the other side of the world to him. For months, Jennifer wondered why someone who appeared to care so much didn’t want to see her. She became depressed to her family. She didn’t want to talk.

Sister: It was like she was depressed. I tried to talk to her, but it was like she didn’t know who I was?; like I was a stranger to her. I just wanted my little sister to be okay. No one understands.

Five months after first speaking via Facebook, Adam asked Jennifer to see her. She suddenly agreed. She told her parents she was shopping with her best friend, Maya. Instead, she was going to meet Adam at a hotel in Preston. After getting onto the bus, she was seen by a friend. They asked her what she was up to. She told them she just had to get out of the house. However, before Jennifer reached Preston, she got off the bus; and walked the opposite way.

Adam was furious that she hadn’t met up with him. She told him she couldn’t. She didn’t know him. She did the smartest thing. But he didn’t like it. He told her he knew where she lived and that he would come and get her. He told her she was ugly and fat and that she should be dead. Over a month, Jennifer received e-mails, texts and instant messages from Anonymous people. One evening, Jennifer was found by her parents in their bathroom. A note was left;

Interviewer: What did the note say?

(Whilst Make You Feel My Love instrumental is playing)

Mother: “I’m sorry, but I couldn’t take it. I will always love you.”

(Collect some baby pictures and use them whilst music is playing)

Adam wasn’t who he said he was. Adam was in fact a 46 year old man named John Huggett; Father to one of Jennifer’s friends. He had created the account to see whether Jennifer would bitch about his daughter. He also had many of the other girls who were friends with Jennifer. Not only was Jennifer affected, but another friend was raped by this man and was then killed so that she didn’t say anything at school. John was sentenced to 25 years imprisonment and has been banned from accessing Facebook or any other social networking sites.

(Whilst Cooler Than Me instrumental is playing)

Following the death of Jennifer and other cyberbullying victims, I’ve decided come to my high school to talk to some Year 10 students about cyberbullying. Meet Jodie etc. (Show clips of them waving).

(Firework instrumental)

Interviewer: Have you ever been bullied at school?

Interviewer: How many social networking accounts do you have an how often do you use them?

Interviewer: Have you ever been victimised online?

Interviewer: Why do you think people cyberbully?

Interviewer: Would you join a campaign to stop bullying and cyberbullying?

(Get interviewees to give their own opinion. This will give the effect of a realistic documentary effect.)

Friday, 8 October 2010

STOP Bullying Campaign

I e-mailed the online campaign STOP Cyberbullying and asked if I could question them. They agreed to talk over the phone or Skype, but after I asked about a date, they never got back to me. I wrote some questions which I could ask them.

Who are the people behind your campaign? Are or have you been victims of online bullying?

Do you think Social Networking sites need to have more privacy settings – in the form of identity theft?

Some social networking sites have a CEOP button especially to bring attention to those who try to sexually abuse children over the internet. Do you think there should be a button to identify online bullies?

How do you think we can cut down cyberbullying?

I can modify these questions when I ask over interviewees.

Analysis of a Documentary

Analysis of a Documentary

Title: Secret Life of the Classroom (Channel 4)

This documentary starts with information and facts, with the cutaway being an extreme long shot of a school. This determines the setting and what the documentary is going to be about – in this case, the reality of joining school at a young age. After a generalised out view and shots of young children in a natural school environment, the documentary goes straight into the story of a specific character; Isaac. There is a brief section which lets us know about Isaac and the struggle he has had. A main issue we are told is that a year ago, his father died. This makes the audience automatically sympathetic for him. While this narration is occurring, shots show Isaac struggling to change into a Physical Education kit, and unable to put his shorts on.

After his school life has had a briefing, we move straight onto his home and meet his mother. They are in the kitchen, discussing what he wants to be. This kind of shot and sound makes it seem very natural and real. The image to the right shows the shot of Isaac and his mother. In the background we see a pram/pushchair which could indicate other siblings or maybe how his mother still wishes he was young. There are also paintings and pictures on the wall. This is a sign of appreciation and appraisal of good work. After the speech from his mother about how she wants Isaac to be happy, it goes to a long shot of a hall, with many hula-hoops on the floor. This denotes a lesson at school and lets the audience know where the next scene is being held. It also has children running around in the hall in slow motion. This could signify a long period of time, or fast paced and energetic children. The sound now is mainly the teacher’s commands – this shows authority. The shots however show the children, especially Isaac, still struggling.

This shot means the lesson has now finished and the teacher is looking after Tyler – we know this as there are subtitles. A shot like this will indicate a subject and dilemma. With the child on the lap of an adult, we automatically know something is wrong with the child, also, the facial expression shows us. However, this isn’t staged, but natural. In this situation, Isaac has pushed Tyler, upsetting him greatly. Going into the second quarter, I notice that the narrative is male. This shows that it is a serious subject and can affect many people. The camera shots show the children at playtime – still, just naturally.

This shot is completely natural, however, the cameras may have a slight effect on the children’s behaviour – they may feel like they “need to put on a show”. This shot will make the audience think seriously about what happens about their children within their first year. And with this shot, we go onto the story of child two – Dylan. Dylan is introduced as a fighter and we are told that he likes to fight with the other children. He comes across as a competitive child. We also see a few seconds later, that Dylan is disabled, with the loss of one eye. He used threatening talk like “If you do not play fighting with me, I will never invite you to my party”. With more teacher narrative, almost the professionals of the documentary, the audience is told that this is natural behaviour for young boys of this age.

This is the shot shown for when the ‘professional’ – teacher – is talking. The white background could signify simplicity. The teacher herself hasn’t been ‘glammed up’ or covered in make-up – to fit the documentary, she may have been asked to come as natural as possible. She is also looking directly at the camera, I noticed.

An extreme long shot like this established the next scene. Due to the current following of Dylan, the audience would assume this is Dylan’s home. Shots like these will give the audience and idea of the place the child lives. As Dylan has been shown as quite a violent child, people may assume he comes from a low end council estate, but this image shows quite a middle-class building, and the people-carrier suggests other siblings.

After a look at Dylan’s home and family life, we go back to the school and are told about the children doing a philosophy lesson once a month. In this section, the teacher holds up a photo of an African person wearing a hat and coat. All you really see is a close up of the picture. The children firstly discuss if the person is male or female. Two of the children have their own opinions and they learn the words agreeing and disagreeing. One of the students then says that they think the person in the picture is a man because they had “black skin”, and another girl clarifies she has a friend who is a girl and dark toned. This brief scene shows the children calm and learning life. We are able to see the vulnerability of the children and their lack of understanding about life.

The next shot is of a council estate property. This means we are looking at the story of one of the children and we assume this child doesn’t come from a brilliant background. The next shot then tells us that this is the home of Isaac. From the first scene about him, we do not see the outside of his home, therefore cannot make decisions. His mother is then seen giving Isaac a bottle for his drink. The whole idea of keeping Isaac as a young child is more convincing now. Within the next few seconds, we find out that Isaac’s father committed suicide. His mother mentions that Isaac had to grow up fast, and I believe that she hasn’t wanted that, and therefore uses the young babyish things to make him seem younger.

Isaac is then naughty in class and bites a fellow classmate. He is then bought into the Head Mistresses office. The mise-en-scene for this room shows folders and bookshelves. This makes the room more ‘office like’. The two chairs are there for when parents are bought to the school and the desk and chair to the right (unseen) makes the room seem like a work environment.

As the documentary goes into the second half, it leans more into the girls’ side. This shot shows the vulnerability of one of the young girls. This next story follows Grace, who is struggles to make friends. When the cameras go to interview the mother, the exterior shot of the home (shown first) is quite glamorous. However, the interview is done outside in a back garden which looks quite shabby. Although the camera has centred her, she is talking to a person at the side, which is unseen.

This external shot shows the school on a rainy day. They may have done this to show sadness and gloom, as Isaac previously mention beforehand about his Dad. The kids were also discussing family life. When children of this age are seen discussing topics like this, the audience feel very sympathetic for them. The children describe what a ‘home’ is to them. Some talked about not spilling milk whereas others spoke about family.

The rest of the documentary summarises that over 650,000 children have to learn to make social skills and that the three children followed in this documentary all have done so. I believe this documentary would be aimed at parents of young children who haven’t started school yet. I don’t think many parents understand what their first child’s first day is going to be like. In this day and age too, it is more difficult to make friends and fit in; therefore these crucial stages at first school will help a child develop skills.

I chose to analyse this documentary as it kind of relates to mine; however the storylines are more structured and about older kids. The uses of Facebook and other social network sites will soon be a part of these young children’s lives. Bullying also starts at a young age, so it needs to be stamped out from day one – I believe.

The text used in this documentary – for subtitles and main titles – is quite a “serious font”. It is similar to Trajan Pro. I believe they chose this as it shows the seriousness. However, if I were to do it, I would use a children’s handwriting font – similar to Lucida Handwriting.

I have gained some ideas from this documentary, including possible cutaways and camera angles. Overall, this documentary used close ups to define sadness and other emotions in the children and long shots to show scenery and where the next scene will be set.

Newspaper Research

Sam Leeson – A serious case of online bullying
- From the Telegraph.

Sam Leeson was targeted because he was a fan of 'Emo' music, which is popular with many children who feel left out of the mainstream.

The term originally meant 'emotional hardcore' and was an offshoot of punk music before it evolved into something more popular.

In common with many 'emos', Sam wore alternative black or dark clothing and had long hair, which attracted the bullies.

The boy, who had four sisters and two brothers, was found hanged in his bedroom by his mother and 12-year-old sister, after months of abuse which was only uncovered after his death.
His father Christopher, 39, of Hardwicke, in Gloucestershire, yesterday pleaded for other victims of bullies to not give in.

Mr Leeson, who is a builder, said: "Please talk to someone. Change your email address and change your mobile.

"Even change your school but don't destroy the lives of your mother, father, brothers or sisters.

"Mostly think of the people who will be putting flowers and cards on the gates of your school and trying to make sense of a pointless waste of a life.

"Bullies are cowards and you can beat them. Do it for Sam's sake."

He added: "I never knew things were so bad for Sam. I feel so sad he didn't speak to me."

Sam, who was a pupil at Severn Vale School in Gloucester, was found hanged in his bedroom on June 5th, 2008.

Sam's laptop computer is now being examined by Gloucestershire Police and an investigation into his death has begun.

No one from Bebo was available for comment.



Megan Gillan – A victim of cyber bullying which lead to suicide.
- From the Mail Online.

Anna Williams first began to worry about her daughter when she noticed how much time she was spending hunched over her computer.

'At first, I thought I was being old fashioned about it,' she says. 'Because I could remember my own parents saying "Look, it's sunny, why don't you go and play outside?" and not wanting to.

'But the more time Alice spent staring at the screen, the more uncomfortable it made me feel. It had become like an obsession - logging on to her pages on the social networking sites Stardoll and Bebo was the first thing she did in the morning and the last thing she did at night.

At 15, Megan decided to take her life and was found dead after taking a fatal over dose of pankillers.

Initial Script Ideas and Research

Start – I want to open my documentary with a blank screen and the sound of a news reporter. Then the screen fades from black to the news report on screen. Then I will use facts and figures and give an opening to cyberbullying with a narrative. While I speak, there will be cutaways of computer screens, keyboards and mobile phones. I will say which I will be aiming to put across to the audience throughout the documentary.

Middle – I will use a real life story in this middle section – but I will change the names. I will create a mini-reconstruction to show what it is like. The real life story will be based on victim Megan Meiers. She was the victim of cyberbullying and sadly took her own life in 2006. Although this took place in the United States, I want to show how serious cyberbullying is all over the world and that this kind of harassment shouldn’t be taking place. Megan was only 13 years old when she committed suicide because her online boyfriend turned nasty. Later on, they found out this ‘boyfriend’ was Megan’s neighbour, trying to find out if Megan was ‘bitching’ about her daughter. During this horrific story I will show cutaways of Megan but blur out the face.

End – I will discuss the current situation worldwide and in the UK. I will post my opinion of cyberbullying and summarise.

Facts and Figures
- 42% of children have been cyberbullied
- 21% have received a threatening e-mail
- 15% of parents knew what cyberbullying is (85% don’t know)
- Girls are more likely to be victimised
- 81% of cyberbullies do it because it’s “funny”.
- 41 percent of victims do not tell anyone in their off-screen lives about their abuse, but 38 percent did tell an online friend.

Why do people cyberbully – poll from 2008
- 22% motivated by revenge
- 18.7% said the victim deserved it
- 10.6 % said they did it for fun
- 3.9% hated the victim
- 3.5% pressured by peers
- 2.8% retaliated against a bully
- 2.5% venting anger
- 5.7% other reasons

The charity BeatBullying has reported that 44% of teenage suicide cases stem from bullying incidents. In just eight years, 2100 children killed themselves, with almost half of these tragedies occurring because of tormenting from other kids. Many victims were pursued by bullies online, via email or on social networking sites.

Specification and My Intial Ideas

I will be producing a five minute documentary looking at the serious side of Cyberbullying and some real life stories. It’ll explore the realistic facts of cyberbullying and how parents and victims can receive help. I will also explore the story of a tragic suicide which was committed around the event of cyberbullying in United States. My main focus is to make my target audience – adults of teenagers and children with laptops/PC – aware of the dangers of cyberbullying and identity theft. For my documentary, I will interview victims and possible victims. I will interview the naive children who have just started high school and the students who are half way through their studies. I will also mock up a scene where I will interview the Executive of a social networking site –Facebook or Bebo. I will use realistic facts and figures from stories in the news and results from national questionnaires and surveys. I will have to research the subject and watch relevant documentaries which will support my documentary.

I will include principal positions and perspectives – such as if people are for or against my subject. I would like to think that everyone is against cyberbullying. People should be against cyberbullying as it is a painful experience for any victims and it can cause tragic deaths and depression issues. There are many campaigns for bullying and cyberbullying such as DirectGov and STOP Cyberbullying.



List of possible cutaways
- Computer screens
- Logging onto social networking – Facebook, Bebo, Twitter etc.
- Keyboards
- Online conversations
- Children in the playground – normal and natural
- Mobile phones and texting
- Upset child?

List of possible speakers/interviews
- Interview Year 7’s, Year 10’s and some Sixth Formers
- Interview a set of parents
- Interview with Facebook Executive?
- Online-interview with campaign “STOP cyberbullying”.